So after dumping said chapter 2 of contemporary menage story, realized what wasn’t working…entire story. It was boring. Nothing was happening. Characters spent too much time thinking.
Too much thinking in story = really bad story.
So now I’m thinking of dumping the entire plot and replotting it as a vampire/werewolf/menage. Now that sounds fun. I think I’m stuck in paranormal land right now, and it’s the only thing hitting my ‘hot’ buttons.
Then again, maybe I’ve been watching “Underworld” too much *snicker*