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Snippet Saturday

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Welcome to Snippet Saturday, where authors share snippets of their writing!

Today is Worldbuilding, a very important component of any book, whether you’re writing paranormal, futuristic or even contemporary. YOu have to build the world in which your characters live, from the city to the homes they live in to the cars they drive, on in case of a brand new world, its rules. they may be rules you create but you still have to abide by them.

I chose TRUE LIES, my futuristic from Ellora’s Cave. It’s a fun, sexy suspensey book with a kickass human heroine and an alien hero I love dearly.

Enjoy! (Excerpt after the jump due to dirty words. :giggle: )
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Snippet Saturday!

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Welcome to Snippet Saturday, where authors share snippets of their work!

Today is Fight Scene, an emotional one. Hmm…fight scenes are always funl. Emotional fight scenes take a relationship to another level, move it forward or backward, reveal something about the characters internally as well their relationship with each other. So let’s go with an emotional fight scene today. This one is between Mac and Lily in Riding Wild, two people who have a past connection, but can’t quite trust each other. Hope you enjoy!

Mac blinked his eyes open. Goddamn, he was tired. And his mouth felt like someone stuffed cotton in there.

He heard a car. Was Tom back already? Dizziness hit him when he bolted upright and clutched his head. What the hell was going on? This time he took it slower, easing to a standing position and moving with careful steps to the window. It was dark outside. Where was Lily?

He walked toward the kitchen. Empty, stuff scattered everywhere. Dread fell like a boulder in his stomach. He quickened his pace down the hall and into Tom’s room, which was a shambles.

Jesus Christ. The house was a mess. Panic cleared his head in an instant.

“Lily?”

He did hear a car. He wasn’t dreaming it. He ran to the side window in time to see Tom’s car pulling down the driveway, the gate closing behind it.

The grogginess, the disorientation…

His gaze shifted to the empty glass on the coffee table, his mind a whirl as he tried to piece together what had happened before he seemingly fell into a coma.

Lily.

She wouldn’t…would she? And why?

Unless she had somehow found out…

Son of a bitch!

He gaze shot to the open vault, confirming his worst fears. The cabinet was torn open, the vial containing the virus gone.

Fuck! He’d completely underestimated her. His mind processed a mile a minute as he paced the center of the room and dragged his fingers through his hair. Okay, he had to think and do it damn fast. He had to get to Lily.
He slid his hands in his pocket and breathed a sigh of relief. His bike keys were still there. The first thing he did was grab a high energy drink out of the fridge and guzzle it down, hoping the caffeine jolt would counter effect the drug and help wake him up in a hurry.

After hitting the button to open the gate at the end of the driveway, he ran out the door and jumped on the bike, weaving a little as he started it up. Blinking to clear the persistent fog in his head, he tore down the driveway, stopping only to push the code on the box by the gate to close them.

He had seen Lily turn right and head west. He took off at high speed after her, hoping she hadn’t gotten too far, and that she wasn’t speeding like he was. If he was lucky, no cops would be meandering down this deserted stretch of road tonight.

The cool night air helped clear his head a little, but he still felt the effects of whatever Lily had drugged him with. Damn, he couldn’t believe she’d done that to him. And why now? She must have figured out Tom was the drop point for the virus, but how?

Not that it mattered. If he didn’t find her and get the vial back, he was screwed. And Lily could be in serious danger.

He took a curve at a breakneck speed he wouldn’t recommend for an inexperienced biker. Or one under the influence of God-only-knew what. But he managed. Finally, he caught taillights up ahead. Could that be Lily? Please let it be her. The back of the car looked familiar. He pushed the bike harder, and whoever was driving sped up. That meant it had to be Lily and she’d spotted his bike.

Relief washed over him when he realized it was Tom’s car. And Lily didn’t seem to be slowing down, which meant he was going to have to find a way to stop her. He pushed the bike hard, traveling at a dangerous speed. Eventually he pulled up alongside her, waving at her to get her attention. She took a glance out the window, shook her head, and sped up.

Oh, no, baby. You’re not getting away. He revved the bike and passed her, hoping like hell he didn’t wreck. Now was where he had to gamble, because if he knew Lily like he thought he did, she wouldn’t jeopardize his life to lose him. He flew around curves, grateful to hit a straightaway where he could really punch the speed. Finally, he was far enough ahead of her so she’d have time to stop, then he pulled the bike around in front of her. The road was narrow. He left the bike in her lane, then stood in the other. She had nowhere to pass around him without either hitting his bike or running him over. And Mac was betting that he knew Lily, that he could predict what she’d do.

He hoped he wasn’t wrong.

In seconds, she was on him, bright lights approaching and drawing dangerously close. Self-preservation kicked in and the urge to get the hell out of the way came with it, but he stood firm.

True to form, she hit the brakes, tires screeching as the car skidded, then fishtailed. She swerved off the road and into the ditch, the front end slamming into a clump of thick brush.

Shit! That’s not what he wanted. He pulled his bike to the side of the road, then went running down the ditch. Smoke poured from the engine, but Lily was already climbing out of the car and glaring daggers at him.

“Are you out of your goddamned mind?” she screamed, advancing on him. “You could have been killed.”

He grasped her arms, looking her over for injury. “Are you all right?”

She wrenched away from his hold. “I’m fine, you idiot. What were you thinking, Mac?”

He shrugged. “I needed you to stop.”

“Screw you.” She turned away and started back to the road.

From the way she was moving, twisting and turning as she climbed up the side of the ditch, she seemed to be fine. Despite the darkness, he didn’t see any blood on her. He followed after her, lifting the bag off her shoulder as they reached the side of the road. “I was thinking that I needed to get the virus.”

She grabbed for her bag. “Give that back!”

He shook his head. “Not a chance. Goddamit, Lily, I trusted you. How could you drug me?”

Her glare was mutinous. “Oh, that’s rich, coming from you. Trust isn’t a word in your vocabulary. Lies? Now that’s a word you live by, isn’t it?”

“I don’t want to talk about this here. Let’s go back to the house.” He reached for her arm but she pulled away and took two steps back.

“I’m not going anywhere with a thief who would sell a virus to terrorists.”

He arched a brow. “You’re making a lot of assumptions about me.”

She snorted. “I’ve had to assume a lot since you’ve refused to tell me anything.”

“I already explained that there were things I couldn’t tell you right away.”

“No. What you mean is that there are things you will never tell me, because you don’t want me to know what you’re up to. Or what you and Tom are up to. God, Mac. How deep are you in this?”

Between the drug still affecting him and being worn out from the chase, Mac was exhausted. He let out a breath of frustration. “It’s not what you think, Lily. Now get on the goddamn bike and let’s get out of here and back to the house where it’s safe.”

“I’m not going with you.”

“You are.” And he wasn’t going to stand there and argue with her for an hour. He latched onto her wrist and started dragging her toward the bike.

“I will not go with you,” she said, her voice low and filled with anger.

He was getting pretty damned pissed off himself, too tired to talk anymore. He picked her up and placed her on the back of his bike, but before he could get on, she was scrambling off.

“What part of no don’t you get, Mac?”

“What are you going to do, Lily? Walk a deserted road in the middle of the night and hope a nice guy picks you up?”

She crossed her arms. “I can take care of myself. I’ll take my chances alone.”

“I’m not leaving you here.”

“And I’m not going with you.”

He dragged his hand through his hair. He was so damn tired. So much, in fact, that when Lily barreled into him and grabbed the bag, she was able to knock him down. Shit! Hitting that asphalt hurt. He held onto her as she jumped on top of him and wrestled him for control of her bag.

He couldn’t push her off without hurting her, so he rolled her over, trying to do it as gently as possible. Which wasn’t easy considering she was a pretty tough fighter and he was still fairly drugged up. But he got her on her back and effectively pinned, holding down her wrists and sitting on her hips.

“Stop!” he said, but she continued to struggle, kicking up at him.

“Let me go, Mac. You don’t need me anymore.”

“I can’t.”

Tears glistened in her eyes. Goddamn he hated doing this to her, seeing the mistrust and the beginning of hate in her expression.

Fuck this. He lifted off her and pulled her to her feet.

“I’m not a bad guy, Lily.”

“You’re full of shit. You’re dirty. That’s why all the secrecy and lies. If there was anything honest in what you were doing, you’d have told me. Now give me my bag.”

She launched after him again, but he held her off with the only weapon that would halt her in her tracks—the truth.

“Lily, I work for the goddamn United States government!”

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Welcome to Snippet Saturday, where authors showcase snippets of their work.

Today is First Touch. Yummy. Intimate. Revealing.

I chose a scene from DARE TO LOVE, a contemporary romance from Samhain Publishing. Hope you enjoy.

“We wouldn’t be actually dating.”

He nodded. “Right. Not dating.”

“It might work. And it probably wouldn’t take long. Once my father sees me with you a few times, he’ll know I’m not interested in Alex, and maybe he’ll drop all thoughts of trying to marry me off.”

“No problem. And besides, after being with me, anyone you pick after that will be a huge relief to your father.”

That thought hadn’t occurred to her. Sadly, he was right. But how did Jake feel about that? His expression was unreadable. She didn’t know if he was amused or annoyed, but either way, she was grateful for his help. She had to take control of her life, make her father understand that she would choose the man she would marry. Not that Jake was that man. But her father didn’t need to know that.

Guilt niggled its way into her heart. This could be rough on Jake. Really rough. People in her circle looked down their noses at those who weren’t born with the proverbial silver spoon in their mouths.

“Jake, I don’t know. I’d feel awful if someone hurt your feelings.”

He laughed. “Believe me, no one could hurt my feelings. I’m immune.”

She didn’t know how someone could become immune to being insulted. “What’s in this for you?”

He shrugged. “Other than irritating your father, nothing. I need to get out more, anyway.”

Somehow she didn’t think he really meant that. “I’ll bet you have a lot of dates.”

He laughed. “I have a few now and then.”

She shouldn’t do this. She really shouldn’t. But the more she thought about it, the more it seemed like the key to her freedom. Her father was a smart man. Surely he’d see right away that she wouldn’t allow him to choose her husband.

“I can’t believe you’re doing this for me, but I appreciate it. And I’ll try not to take up too much of your time.”

He shrugged. “Whatever gets you off the hook, sweetheart. I’m glad to help out. And if it irks your old man in the process, all the better.”

Okay, this was starting to sound like fun. And spending time with Jake wouldn’t be a hardship at all. He was great looking, had a good sense of humor, he was smart, and, admittedly, she liked him. She really liked him. He made her feel good. She liked touching him.

“Let’s dance.”

She snapped her gaze to his. “What?”

She barely heard the music playing in the background. Jake stood and held out his hand. “Dance. Practice being together for when your dad sees us. You might as well get used to it now.”

“Okay.”

She stood and let Jake lead her to the…well, there really wasn’t a dance floor in the place. Jake took a few steps away from the table and drew her against him.

Solid, warm, he wrapped his arm around her back and entwined his fingers with hers, then swayed to the music of a ballad.

“You’re stiff as a board, Lucy. Your father will never believe we’re dating if you don’t loosen up.”

He was right. She hadn’t been ready for this. She really did need the practice.

“Look at me.”

She tilted her head back and was instantly lost in the warm depth of his eyes. They held a sensual promise she’d love to explore, if only they had a real relationship.

So she’d pretend it was real. She could do that, couldn’t she? She’d fantasize that Jake really did care about her, that he really was interested, that the spark of attraction she felt for him was returned.

The way he looked at her, the way his lips curled in such a sexy manner, the way he leaned in as if was going to—
His lips brushed hers, casual, a soft caress. Lightning struck and she was rooted to the spot, unable to take her next breath. Then he pressed more firmly. Shocked at first, Lucy did nothing but freeze up.

Jake leaned back. “Don’t tell me this is your first kiss.”

“No. Of course not. I just…I didn’t know you were going to kiss me.”

He arched a brow. “Was I supposed to ask for permission?”

Her heart pounded, her hand began to sweat in his. Really, no wonder he thought her inexperienced. What an idiot. “I can do better.”

“I’ll just bet you can.”

Could all men lower their voices and whisper in a way that made a woman melt, or was it just Jake? She shivered as he leaned in again, and this time she was ready.

Or she thought she was ready, but not for the power of a kiss that rocked her right off her feet.

She’d expected more of the same, a light sweep of his lips against hers, a chaste, get-to-know-you kind of kiss.
Instead, he leaned her back over his arm and took her mouth in a kiss that spoke of possession, of demand, forcing her mouth open to slide his tongue inside.

Every part of her body exploded with sensation, with desire, with a hunger that hadn’t been satisfied in far too long. She felt every part of that kiss in every nerve ending of her body.

When Jake raised her up and pulled away, she was dizzy, turned on and ready for more.

“Now when we’re together in front of your dad, we’ll act more like a couple,” he said, taking her hand and leading her back to the table.

Disoriented, Lucy grabbed her beer and took a couple deep swallows.

Jake nursed his beer and grinned at her, seemingly unaffected by what had just happened.

He sure could turn it on and off easily, couldn’t he?

But could she? Because she was hot and bothered as hell, and not at all ready to stop what he’d just started.

This game she’d agreed to might be more than she could handle.

A lot more.

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